Tuesday, 20 March 2012

unprecedented noontime death (1)

I have a habit of nosing in on my neighbours and their affairs. Perhaps it was because I lived in such close proximity to them. Our block of flats was of the old kind. Apparently, the architect had grown up in Brooklyn, New York, back when that place had been home to the odd peoples whom moved in from other states or countries to look for a new beginning. Anyway, the flats had sorry, chipped plaster walls. The white was more yellow than white. Sounds carried through best. Sometimes, if I cupped my ear along the wall, the vibrations would be absolutely fantastic. 

Another curiosity I would indulge in was going through my neighbours' post boxes. It was an interesting way to piece together information on what sort of people I lived with. But of course, post these days are all cryptic packages. They come with their surnames and "private" and "confidential". Some companies embellish the envelopes so I know when the gas bill is enclosed or maybe a bank has decided to give their client a an upgrade in service. I'm on Gold, if you had to know. Does that mean anything to you?

No.5 was a male, possibly rather poorly off. No.9 consisting of two adults with different names, flatmates then. Or friends. No.10 were a family or a couple. I could never tell if they had children or not since society never deigns to send post to children on official business. No.17 had a freedom pass. I coveted that. No.21 lived at the very top and from what I could tell, she was almost always late for work. She never took the lift before 10am. I think she ran down those stairs every morning and had on one occasion lost a shoe, right in front of my door. 

Outside, our block of flats was called "Dulwich Heights". The whole south-side was graffiti free, which was a blessing to the groaning bricks. I dumped sniffed as I walked past our cluster of bins and recycling boxes. Someone had moved them again so that blue, yellow and brown now basked in the sunlight. I swerved past and grimaced. Trash day was Tuesday. Still a little while to go. 

No.5 never recycled. I had made several mental notes to leave a stinkbomb under his floormat or somesuch. But being of a reasonable, mature age, I passed that thought by. I decided to settle for a fishing wire and small amounts of cheese that I left inbetween his door hinges. 

But that day, I was on my way back up the stairs. I didn't take the lift due to my intermittent claustrophobia but hiked up the stairs. That was when I heard the sirens wail. They were a salvo to the heavy footsteps clattering up the stairs. I crouched behind my door and listened intently. 


3 Comments:

At 11 April 2012 at 06:44 , Anonymous Anonymous said...

Cant wait to read the next part :O You write really well, I love it <3

 
At 11 April 2012 at 11:37 , Blogger juzi_snaps said...

thanks for taking your time to go through this! i'm rather pleasantly surprised and i'm glad you liked it. that said, i have no plans on how to develop what i wrote. i've published the part (2) which had been gathering dust on my dashboard for a while but i honestly wrote it in a fit of boredom, hoping that some cool noir-like story would come out of it. but i'm not sure i can provide a part (3) for at least a while. sorry! x

 
At 11 April 2012 at 14:32 , Anonymous Anonymous said...

You are most welcome :). Well Ive read part 2 now, and let me say it is an exelent turn of events. I know how it goes with writing and how it can be tricky to continue the work, but all the same, I wish you luck on the development of the next part :)

 

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